Changes to first draft

We have decided to make a few changes to our film opening as we felt as though it could be a lot better. Below are the changes we made to our film opening:
Add quiet music to add tension
Change font to typewriter
Remove the scene where I walk into the room.
End on the eyes
Redo voiceover and change script
Add in more street shots (to make up for cut out scene)
Change title name (To Red Herring)
Move titles

Final product first draft

Location Recce

Script for voiceover

Shooting script

Timeline

Storyboard